Lord Anzius

Do you read a lot of mangas? (I'm guessing yes.) Great work. Well drawn. I haven't actually read any of your stories so I don't really know if the cover ...

Nice. I can't really say anything, because most of what can be said has been said. As said above you have a hook, a good hook if I may say, ...

yes you have. Thx :D

Fantastista työtä :D Taidan puhuu ny kuitenki enkkuu et muutki pystyy ymärtää. :) .................................................................................................................

*sry :( . I'll just be watching for some time how the story, progresses :smt108 . I'll try and work on my descriptive writing at the same time. :smt024 sry ...

*ok, I'm confused; did Maradomin take Ray aside, out of the infirmary, or talk to him in the infirmary??* He took him aside from the infirmary. MARADOMIN: He slept on ...

Fat Carl Monday: "Don't mention it, lad." Carl said He turned. "I got to go and find my bottle of rum." he said under his breath "see a later lads."

Give some critt: DUST AN’ PRODUCTS An old store stood in a cold, narrow corner in the dark. The dimmed dark red stone of which the store and the buildings ...

thats what I said. then my friend got an other friend of his who also thinks that plants have feelings...

Alan: Alan looked at the two people, and sighed. He stood up and took the bucket. "I'll cook these now." he said Alan walked to the fire and put the ...

Fat Carl Monday: Fat Carl Monday was was walking around the ship looking for his rum bottle, when he saw Tim crying. He looked with foolish amazement. Why is the ...

DO plants have feelings, Do they feel pain. I would say no, but some of my friends say yes, I want to hear your opinion.

*Sorry about that* MARADOMIN : "let me stay for at least two days." Maradomin said smiling "I assure you. You will meet the clans." The prince was still sceptical about ...

the yellow beast is a yellow beast.................... :D

True. I'm actually one of the lucky ones, my dad has been a teacher and principal. He just tells me about all of these things. But really, someone should really ...